The changes I made to Spread the Word

In "Spread the Word!", I made numerous changes in the actual writing. Going off the comment made by another classmate, I saw that the focus was skewed, so I edited it so that the subject was not just "poverty issues with children", but all the issues with children. I changed the way the first paragraph is written so that it doesn't sound like a guilt trip. I also changed the last paragraph so that it specifically mentions the point of the blog. Throughout the entire blog, I've edited sentences so they sound better. I made specific references to poverty and human trafficking because they are the most dire situations.